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Open Poetry #22

To Our Love (O My Soul)

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

0 posted 2002-09-08 04:06 PM

(read slowly to the tune of "What Wonderous Love" if you are familiar with that song. this poem made me cry.)

I have found my soul today,
Now I cry,
Now I cry.

I have found my soul today,
O my soul,
O my soul.

I have found my soul today
Shine through this cold and distant sky,
In LOVERS ARMS I CRY....
O my soul,
O my soul...

What wonderous love is this?
O my soul,
O my soul,

What WONDEROUS LOVE IS THIS?!?
O MY SOUL
O MY SOUL.

Can you teach me of this life?
I FEAR ONE DAY I WILL DIE...
IN LOVERS ARMS I CRY..
O MY SOUL..
o, my soul...

Life is a lonely journey to, and a heavy-hearted departure from three words. I LOVE YOU

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-09-08 04:18 PM

This is good

Cold hands means a warm heart

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

2 posted 2002-09-08 04:36 PM

unfortunately I am not as fortunate to know the song you are talking about but nonetheless your words do flow and I enjoyed..now I must go on a hunt to find this song you are talking about!

Kristen

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2002-09-08 04:46 PM

"Oh, my"---sounds like you re-discovered a part of yourself.
I'm not familiar with the melody of the song you're referring to, but the way you wrote this piece, it has a soulful beat built right into it.

Linda

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-08-2002 06:20 PM).]

anya
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 393
London, UK

4 posted 2002-09-08 05:22 PM

enjoyed this VERY much, sadly I do not know that song but hey I still liked this alot, flowed so well,
anya

GOlDsparklESS
Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 428
central nj

5 posted 2002-09-08 06:08 PM

O darling. Your words are gorgeous, as they speak of your soul!!!!! smile.

peace.

O' to be delivered from the realm of the rational into pure song...

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