Open Poetry #22 |
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Doodles |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn ![]() |
Doodles I’ve been writing for a while, now because I thought I might have something to say So, day after day I sit with pen in hand Doodling Making scribbles Gesture drawings of women I’ve known things that I’ve feared odd happenings in my life All the while hoping that the thing that needs to be said spills onto this paper But when I examine the damage, I’ve done to this poor parchment for that thing that wants to be written All I see, is more crap And I think to myself if all I’m going to write is this dreck couldn’t it, at least be pretty ~wranx In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Oh I am sure it is beautiful. Even if the feelings of your heart appear ugly to you, or just crap as you say, they are rare and special to those who are reading your heart. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now there you go, telling me what you think I want to hear... wrong. Keep writing. You never know how others will look at it. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
wranx doodles can be charming and disarming...a stream from the unconscious where dreams are born....each original, and a piece of art, really. Keep it up! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I hope you don't just doodle and scribble on scrap pieces of paper! If you do them in a notebook, then you'll have a book of gems that can be the fodder for future masterpieces of your art and writing! Enjoy your work! Linda |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I relate to this...at times, I just erase what I have written...and start over...and sooner or later, usually sooner...poof! Out spits something that others enjoy... I think you do this too....let the critical eye bring growth...as you have done with just these words... |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I usually end up with crumpled paper in a corner somewhere bc I get frustrated but you know its been awhile since I actually picked up a piece of paper and pen..and to think I used to love doing that *sigh* now i'm just addicted to the computer!!! blech...ohh wait hrm..I forgot to even comment on the poem..yea I dig it... Kristen If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
it's not about pretty, Ed it's about You and you succeed at that better than most post them doodles, man keep them wimmin folks happy ![]() brian |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I think you should use those doodles along with your poems... Maybe we could figure out what they mean... ![]() Lyra |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Well, Ed, there's something to be said for honesty, don't you think? Enjoyed reading this! *smiles* ![]() ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
The muse isn't always pretty, Ed, but she still whispers. What's she saying now? Mike |
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