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wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn

0 posted 2002-09-07 07:48 PM



After hours, in a friends' bar,
a small, select group of regulars
sat at a table, in the “Vault”
(The Bar had once been The Bank)
drinking free booze and
playing,  not so free,  Poker

Caroline was sitting on my knee
“assisting”
We were using her money, after all
“Was” her money, as “cards”
were not, forthcoming

Or perhaps,
her warm wiggle and girlish giggle
had put me off my game

As I leaned forward
to toss away the last awful hand
I suggested that we adjourn back
to my place, for a while

“What about your girlfriend?”

“Well, I really like Belle and we’ve
been together for…”

“No,no,no. What I meant was”
“What about your GIRLfriend?"
~wranx



In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".      

~wranx~


[This message has been edited by wranx (09-07-2002 08:53 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-09-07 07:50 PM


LMAO This was good

Cold hands means a warm heart

WhiteRose
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2 posted 2002-09-07 08:48 PM


Or perhaps,
her warm wiggle and girlish giggle
had put me off my game

It was the wiggle of course. So, where is this girl anyway?..not that I'm looking, just you know, for future reference. ;-)

brian sites
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3 posted 2002-09-08 12:31 PM


hahahhhahahaha!
wr
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oh, damn
brahahahahahahian

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2002-09-08 12:38 PM


ROTFL. Well done, night owl!
What about her?
This really gave me a good chuckle, yanno that?

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (09-08-2002 12:39 AM).]

Duncan
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5 posted 2002-09-08 01:21 AM


This is why I love being up nights!!  Enjoyed the story...part 2?  LMAO
bsquirrel
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6 posted 2002-09-24 06:06 PM


And I new story begins
after this poem ends.

Loved it, wranx.

vandana
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7 posted 2002-09-24 06:08 PM


ENJOYED
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