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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-09-07 02:22 PM



I'm not sure of the reason
but this I will say
I do know for certain
this love's for always.

It's the gentle caress
the way that we touch,
we share the same thoughts
we love with so much.

Our hearts are in sync
yours beats with mine,
the very same beats
at the very same time.

We couldn't be any closer
we share the same space.
Engraved upon each other
even time won't erase.

When you leave this earth
I want to go too,
there would be no way
to go on without you.

WhiteRose

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-09-07 02:38 PM


Very lovingly penned Anne.
Enjoyed this piece so much.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-09-07 02:57 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo beautiuflly heartfelt, sweet friend, and may this true love last forever for you both! (kiss on cheek) Yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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3 posted 2002-09-08 09:23 PM


I feel the emotion

Cold hands means a warm heart

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2002-09-08 09:36 PM


beautiful and loving Rose, well done.  

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2002-09-08 09:41 PM


"Engraved upon each other..."---Now that's what I'd call, a very close relationship!

I enjoyed the emotions this evoked in me---felt like I was bathed in loving pink light!

Earth Angel

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By the Seaside
6 posted 2002-09-08 10:28 PM


I sometimes think about who will go first
and the one who'll be left behind.

When you leave this earth
I want to go too...

That line wraps up the disturbing thought quite nicely.  Lovely writing WhiteRose~


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just out of reach
7 posted 2002-09-08 10:29 PM


Just lovely. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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