Autumn Song or Wind's Serenade

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Open Poetry #22

Autumn Song or Wind's Serenade

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2002-09-07 12:50 PM

Autumn Song or Wind's Serenade (which title?)

wish Tchaikovsky were here
for wind is strumming
the caterpillar headed grasses
as if they are the strings on a harp

I so want to hear their music
I know he could;
I know he’d conduct for me
the lovely sounds
of autumn breeze
across the leas
with orchestral pleas

©September 7, 2002

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

[This message has been edited by VAS (09-07-2002 12:55 PM).]

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

1 posted 2002-09-07 01:01 PM

This has a nice flow to it! I think that I like the title "Wind's Serenade" better. It sort of flows along with the poem itself.
Nicely done!!!

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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-09-07 07:29 PM

Very beautifully written.

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Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2002-09-07 07:31 PM

Very nice Virginia, I think I like Winds Serenade better of the two. Chris

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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-09-07 09:25 PM

(smiles) Looks like so far its unanimous, I too pick Wind's Serenade! (kiss on cheek) This is beautifully symphonic, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

5 posted 2002-09-08 12:12 PM

youw ould have to contend with the orchestral firworks if you're thinking of good old Peter..nonetheless an interesting write

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