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Open Poetry #22

Elias

Tim
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since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2002-09-07 11:54 AM

Elias walks alone at night, through darkened woods precarious,
On needled path 'mid shimmering pines, man-child with gait temarious,
As light of heaven's stars above, fall on life's desolation,
Elias waits not for the dawn, walks on in isolation,
Evening breezes whisper forth, chanting through the trees,
Softly calling out his name, in muted repartees,
Into the brush a rabbit steals, moving quickly thither,
Elias pauses but for an instant, as darkness calls him hither.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2002-09-07 12:01 PM

Hi Tim...so good to see you! You do night like no other poet I know...into beautiful!

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-09-07 12:08 PM

You do paint night so well Tim...
thank you for popping in...
stay awhile, will you?

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2002-09-07 12:24 PM

Hello, Tim! Pleased to meet you, and pleased to have read your words. Simply stated, I love this poem. You created the atmosphere so incredibly well, that I felt every emotion you were converying.

Love, NIGHT & Laughter
Linda

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

4 posted 2002-09-07 12:37 PM

oh tis perfectly lovely, of the night.

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