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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-09-07 04:47 AM



Hush...
a shadow's blood on moon...
Touch...
a finger's love too soon
Rush
a blood-red sun of noon
Such
is love...released... balloon

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Zall
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1 posted 2002-09-07 04:58 AM


Nice thought provoking piece,

Zall

brian sites
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2 posted 2002-09-07 05:13 AM


string tied

Hush
moonbeam covers lips
Touch
of love's patient sips
Rush
the time when sun dips
Such
balloon feels our grips


serenity blaze
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3 posted 2002-09-07 05:43 AM


and I sail away with you...
Sunshine
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4 posted 2002-09-07 06:29 AM



Now...now....this....
was very quiet, indeed....

BluesSerenade
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5 posted 2002-09-08 09:36 PM


I love the way you tell it Serenity!!

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