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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2002-09-07 02:45 AM


Afterglow of first fulfillment
found parted lips capturing air
in effort to calm fluttering heart
passion...

your mouth, still near
offered litte hope of sleep
as seconds promised thirds
well into dawn

~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

© Copyright 2002 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
bsquirrel
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1 posted 2002-09-07 02:50 AM


Tiersdin,

Hmm....

So many kisses,
so little time?



Me

anya
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2 posted 2002-09-07 04:01 AM


oh I like this one, short and sweet and put in a very eloquent way, well done,
anya

Zall
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3 posted 2002-09-07 05:06 AM


well written Tiersdin,

reminds me of being with someone new for the first time. the excitment mixed with the desire.

Zall

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4 posted 2002-09-07 07:25 AM



A delightful promise....

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5 posted 2002-09-07 01:16 PM




(smiles) This is a beautifully delightful read, sweet friend, I love it, you always give it 110%, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiersdin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2002-09-07 01:22 PM


With your sensuous writing, you've got my heart fluttering!----where's a man when you need him! tehe

Linda

wranx
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7 posted 2002-09-07 01:28 PM


Well, Tier
This is a pretty little picture. Renoir?

~wranx

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".      

~wranx~

Tiersdin
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8 posted 2002-09-07 03:24 PM


Thanks everyone for your kind comments. I am deeply moved by them all...

Thank you so much!
~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

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