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...in my boxers...

0 posted 2002-09-07 02:11 AM


(she knows who she is)

I'm your man,
you're my girl,
I can't hold your hand.

Hear the sighs
of a suitor waiting
till the time is right.

Hear the song...

I'm you're man,
you're my girl,
(but) I can't hold your hand.

Time wants patience,
my heart wants now,
come close, feel my strength
(my weakness)

Hear my cry...

I'm your man,
you're my girl,
I can't hold your hand.

No, no, no, no,
No, no, no, no...
I'm the suitor waiting.


By 'Titus' (Inspired by Usher's 'U Got It Bad')

[This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (09-07-2002 06:05 AM).]

© Copyright 2002 Daniel Redding - All Rights Reserved
Zall
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1 posted 2002-09-07 05:17 AM


Love that song, particularly the guitar solo, is one of the few really soulful songs released for a long time.

Good Work

Zall

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2 posted 2002-09-07 05:38 AM


Ti, this is beautiful. Absolutely beautiful
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3 posted 2002-09-07 09:54 AM


Lovely, and yep, you got it bad
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4 posted 2002-09-13 12:17 PM


dang, Ti..you do have it bad..miss reading your words! sorry I haven't been around much lately..meandering through some crud..*hugs*


Kristen

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5 posted 2002-09-13 12:18 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

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6 posted 2002-09-13 01:37 PM


"Hear my cry"----indeed, I certainly do!

Soulfully put together.

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7 posted 2002-09-15 09:41 PM


Thank you all.

Sincerely,
Titus

"I'll prepare myself, and one day my time will come."
            -Abraham Lincoln

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8 posted 2002-09-16 12:57 PM


"come close, feel my strength
(my weakness)"

This was my favourite part. I'm liking these recent poems by you, though I hate that they are inspired by pain.

"you don't need one of these to let me inside of you" T.A.

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9 posted 2002-09-16 08:13 AM




(sigh) Oh Daniel, I know this song so very well too, sweet friend, and this wonderful inspiring tune you cranked out in inspiration! (smiles) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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