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GOlDsparklESS
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0 posted 2002-09-07 12:15 PM



I forgot.
I am.
You are.


We are.

Our love will light the Way...

Hearts sailing
Ancestral footprints celestial
Incandescent trailing
A Soul’s cathedrals

This journey has not been embarked alone.  There are others. I’m lost. Your presence is flickering serenity, pooling incandescent is some stratified existential level of being.  Humanity’s lost. Show me the way.

jaded, history repeating. hollow. toxic. lies.
Break me, you fool.
Evaporating mentalities
Slowly dreaming
Deferred…

There is hope.  The paradigm is shifting.
A vision's grandeur soars,
Triumphant.
A beautiful life is a hologram,
A virtual Elysium.
We are the generation that will change the world.
Love is all there is.    

There is so much that could be said, done, and shared in this moment.
There is only one resonance within my heart, Golden...

Our love will light the way.

© Copyright 2002 Manisha Narang - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-09-07 12:41 PM




(smiles) Oh Manisha, yes, and I believe with all my heart we can make a huge difference, may we all listen to Him and relate to Him and slowly rebuild a harmonious world for all of us with nothing but love! (smiles) I love your words of hope, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Manisha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-09-07 01:29 AM


Bravo! ! ! indeed all we need is our love. i see you've been reading the celestine vision. hehe. im reading it right now too hehe

Life is a lonely journey to, and a heavy-hearted departure from three words. I LOVE YOU

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2002-09-07 01:37 AM


Amen!

Linda

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2002-09-07 04:35 PM


Hearts sailing
Ancestral footprints celestial
Incandescent trailing
A Soul's cathedrals


This journey has not been embarked alone.  There are others. I'm lost. Your presence is flickering serenity, pooling incandescent is some stratified existential level of being.  Humanity's lost. Show me the way.
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Your use of vocabulary in this is superb...
as is the imagery.
Wonderful ethereal writing and expressions.
Well done!!

In the space between now and then
I lost the fire, lost a friend
and Ill never be the same again
Still, I believe in the innocence
we gave away.

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