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rebekah33
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0 posted 2002-09-06 11:48 PM


When we are old
and whithered away,
I hope we dance on our porch
to the song in our hearts.
There I will look into your eyes
And regret every moment I spent
outside your arms.


"So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-09-06 11:50 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-09-06 11:52 PM




(sigh) Oh Rebekah, this is soooooo beautiuflly heartfelt, sweet friend, I too yearn so much for my love Joanna and wrote my 16,000th post for her "Love At First Sight" dreaming of having her so much and loving her as much as I can in my life! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rebekah, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!'

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-09-06 11:54 PM


Oh so very pretty.
~Hugs~

secretlife
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4 posted 2002-09-07 05:09 AM


Great??? These romantice words affect me very much...

Thanx alot.


Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)


anya
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5 posted 2002-09-07 05:16 AM


yeah this is so sweet, just lovley
anya

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6 posted 2002-09-07 08:39 AM



The way it should be!

WhiteRose
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7 posted 2002-09-07 10:05 AM


This is so soft and sweet. A wonderful thought. And the picture of dancing on the porch with someone you've been with for years in love is lovely.
Earth Angel
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8 posted 2002-09-07 05:13 PM


With a write like this, I'm sure he'd regret every minute he spent outside of your arms, as well!

Linda

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