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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA 
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I am online 10 minutes With my Liam I was running late Because of my Dad After 10 minutes Liam says "I gotta go for now." I guess he is helping Move his Aunt in again I was hoping to get some Time with him tonight But I guess it won't happen And I know it isn't His fault Well he is gone with his friends tomorrow I won't get to speak with him again until Sunday Because my Dad Ran me late He could get back on But it will probably be after my bed time But I got to think positive That I will get to talk to him again Before my bed time Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Julie, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I sure hope he does come back on before your bedtime as I can understand how it feels to miss someone right away! (kiss on cheek) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is a neat 'stream of consciousness' poem. I like it. Nan(Pilgrim variety) |
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