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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-09-06 10:05 PM




© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-09-06 10:09 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, I have heard this before too, this is beautiful, and certainly through your words the ripples can always be seen cascading down every babbling brook! (sigh) You are on a roll today, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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2 posted 2002-09-06 10:09 PM


OHMYGOSH!!  Is there any stopping you?? LOL
This one I really love!!
Gosh can't wait till you get a digital camera.
~Hugs~

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3 posted 2002-09-06 10:11 PM


KJ...is there any stopping you??  Love this
one,  makes me want to just jump off and
dive in...  Are there any fish in this
fantastic looking piece of nature's water?

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4 posted 2002-09-06 10:39 PM


Not only does the water shimmer, but the artist gleams. Great. ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2002-09-06 11:30 PM


Just exquisite. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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6 posted 2002-09-06 11:32 PM


I like, I like!  Must have a lot of them critters here then.
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7 posted 2002-09-07 12:40 PM


Tis true perhaps, in the shimmer lives mysteries that dance.
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8 posted 2002-09-07 01:46 PM


"They say where fairies dance, water ripples"

Now when I look outside my window and see the waters of the lake rippling---I'll know why!

Linda

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9 posted 2002-09-07 03:06 PM


Kari dear, that just brought the biggest smile.  I love the ripples the lil fairies make, and the bigger ripples that your words make.  Just INCREDIBLE.......

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

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10 posted 2002-09-07 03:45 PM


Hello beautiful sunshine!

I love this poem especially because it tells a story in so few words.

*hugs*
~Tier

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11 posted 2002-09-07 03:48 PM


I love it! beautiful image..now how do you do that?! I can never figure that sort of thing out..

Kristen

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12 posted 2002-09-07 04:10 PM


This is a really beautiful image, thankyou
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13 posted 2002-09-07 05:19 PM


Very Beautiful...

Enjoyed
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