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CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-09-06 04:09 PM







summer growing old
wrinkles of fall now showing
clouds fondle thunder


pale moon; dusk sky
you have arrived so early
are you lonely too?


hidden bird trills songs
while fall rains strum on and on
sweet descant to drums


mist topped mountains dream
like Shangri-La conceals
their secret summits



Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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1 posted 2002-09-06 04:13 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, this is breathtaking, this gave me a relaxing feel like the mountains of Tibet or the pan flutes of the Andes! (kiss on cheek) You always portray nature so gorgeously, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

CSKpoet
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since 2002-07-12
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Island in Paradise
2 posted 2002-09-06 04:36 PM


Thank you Noah
Yes I adore nature and am outdoors as much as I can get...I truly found beauty everywhere I have lived in every terrain. The creator is truly excellent and I can experience Him in each place that I dwell.
Hopefully these haiku are a vacation for the mind..smiles,
Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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somebody's dungeon
3 posted 2002-09-06 07:30 PM


Oh this is lovely. The picture, the poem, the wonderful tropical feel. Enjoyed!
Zall
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since 2002-08-25
Posts 214
London, England
4 posted 2002-09-06 07:59 PM


Touched me this one,

Makes me think of Kilimanjaro,

Love it,

Zall

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