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Open Poetry #22

House Cleaning

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-09-06 01:46 PM

I look around the house
With a look of disgust
The dust and dirt on everything
The floor must be vaccumed clean
My rooms are full of clutter
My dishes are still in the sink
I have to feed the outdoor kitties
Oh lord what a mess
So I start to clean
I do the dishes first
Then I deal with the outdoor kitties
Next I scoop kitty litter
Now I am in the bedroom
What to clean next
Is always my next thought

Cold hands means a warm heart

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2002-09-06 01:56 PM

Ha! Ha! Ha!---can you clean my house while you're at it?!? I'm not one of those women who just loves housework, but it is one of those necessary evils! I do it anyway, 'cause when my house is out of order--so am I! Ha! Ha!

I enjoyed this poem very much, dear loner!

Linda

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2002-09-06 01:56 PM

You can come over and do my place anytime you feel you've too much time on your hands

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

ThunderMage
Senior Member

since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

3 posted 2002-09-06 03:13 PM

It'd take you to put up with it Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-09-06 03:21 PM

(smiles) Well, if you insist, we have a basement that needs a little tidying up! (giggles) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love your words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

anya
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 393
London, UK

5 posted 2002-09-06 03:30 PM

I always say that 'I don't hold with cleaning', subsequently my room is a pig-sty, so this made me smile, thankyou

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