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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-09-06 10:46 AM



Emotions escape
the barrier of conscience
words flow to paper
verse created with rhythm
now a vision poetic.

WhiteRose

"I can't stay on your life support, there's a shortage in the switch"~~Pink

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2002-09-06 10:48 AM


Yes, a poetic vision you paint for us   
I love it!

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2002-09-06 10:56 AM


Yes, you got my attention again (as always!)---Tanka, WhiteRose---ah, yes indeed---words to draw me in!

This truly is a remarkable tanka!

YOUR words flow to paper, creating rhythm and a poetic vision, well-worth the reading!

Linda

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3 posted 2002-09-06 10:56 AM


Nice flow!
Creation in words. Beautiful!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

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4 posted 2002-09-06 12:05 PM


Exactly. Enjoyed this.
Sandra

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5 posted 2002-09-06 03:42 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, yes, and you always write of this poetry so beautifully, you speak of the gist of it so well as it is almost everything, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

CSKpoet
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6 posted 2002-09-06 03:54 PM


beautiful tanka!

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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