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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2002-09-06 10:12 AM


Snow-laden cedars
--Silent sentinels on guard,
In the forest deep.


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1 posted 2002-09-06 10:18 AM


scintillating scene
stolid snow-laden cedars
silent sentinels

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Krishankins
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2 posted 2002-09-06 10:18 AM


Nice haiku!
"Silent sentiels on guard"
Very strong image!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

WhiteRose
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3 posted 2002-09-06 10:23 AM


Very nicely done!
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2002-09-06 10:23 AM


Interloper----Oooo! You woooo me with the "S" word---simply scintillating!
Thank you for the perfect poetic reply!

Linda

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2002-09-06 10:45 AM


Krishankins--I appreciate your appreciation!

WhiteRose--I aim to please!

Love, Light & Laughter
Linda

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6 posted 2002-09-06 11:37 AM


Cinderella pines
Await the annual ball
Of winters white prom



YAY!!!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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7 posted 2002-09-06 11:41 AM


Earth Angel
Very nice, enjoyed.

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2002-09-06 11:45 AM


Noah----Imagine my surprise, and my pleasure, of seeing a reply such as this! It's magical! MAGICAL!

Thank you so much, sweet prince of the PIP people!

Love, Light & Laughter
Linda

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9 posted 2002-09-06 11:51 AM


Snow in clumps like stones
Cedars lay their burden down
Silent poems melt

WhiteRose
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10 posted 2002-09-06 11:58 AM


Dusted sparkle white
giant forest evergreen
now in winter pose.

hmmmmm...mixed up my trees..but I like this.

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (09-06-2002 12:01 PM).]

Earth Angel
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11 posted 2002-09-06 11:59 AM


Mike---your reply says it all! No more words are needed. Thank you!

P.S. It sounds like you're feeling the sunshine today! (smilie face)

Linda

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12 posted 2002-09-06 02:07 PM


Yep, I'm feelin' better, Linda,
even though nothing's really changed today.

I'll deal.

Mikey

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13 posted 2002-09-06 02:17 PM



Mike---It sounds as though you will get through this funk, because your "I'll deal"
shows you've got the strength to "deal" with whatever is thrown at you! May I suggest a change in diet---macadamia nuts are divine and can make anyone feel happy!!

Take Care
Linda

Earth Angel
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14 posted 2002-09-06 02:19 PM


WhiteRose---sorry I missed your response until now---Thanks for your poem!--I like it too!

Linda

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15 posted 2002-09-06 02:42 PM


what a lovely haiku!
smiles, cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Earth Angel
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16 posted 2002-09-06 02:45 PM


CKSpoet---coming from you, that is quite a compliment. You create magic in yours!

Linda

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17 posted 2002-09-06 03:20 PM


That's crazy, Linda! I was eating white chocolate and macademia cookies when I read that!

Mike

Earth Angel
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18 posted 2002-09-06 03:29 PM


Mike---is that for real what you just said?
'Cause if it is, I'm getting spooked!

Just before Magicmystery brought my Twin Souls out of hiding, I had been thinking how much I'd love for that poem to come up again, because it is one of my favourites. When I returned to page one, there it was at the top!

Linda

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