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Open Poetry #22

first hello...

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2002-09-06 02:27 AM

You laugh
At me each time
I try to run and hide
From your gaze
Time and time again
You tell me there is
No need for me
To be so shy
But did you not know!?
Did you not get the memo!?
That I've been
Burned a thousand times before
And locked and chained the door
In which protects
My insecurities
Vulnerablity
Yes even my honesty
I'm so afraid
To let it be known
That maybe
Yes just maybe
I want to get to know you more
And show you a softer
Yet spunkier side of me
A Prima donna
Of your dreams
Or even perhaps
A Ballerina
Behind closed doors
But first
Perhaps it would help
If I could just get past
Our first initial Hello...

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (09-06-2002 02:28 AM).]

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2002-09-06 05:35 AM

Very nice...James

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-09-06 08:18 AM

"A Prima donna
Of your dreams
Or even perhaps
A Ballerina
Behind closed doors
But first
Perhaps it would help
If I could just get past
Our first initial Hello..."

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I think this is one of your best poems yet, I could envision the ballerina's silhouette behind the curtains! (kiss on cheek) Kudos to you, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2002-09-06 08:54 AM

gotta take some chances in life...

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

4 posted 2002-09-06 09:39 AM

Well Ceinwyn, I would suggest that you give him this lovely poem. It states your case beautifully and, I believe, fetchingly.

~wranx

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".

~wranx~

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