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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2002-09-06 11:31 PM


Sometimes
I can be too hard on myself
And at other times
I Want to take on the world
And tell people off
Isn't there a divine median
Where tranquility
And choas interjoin
For once in my life
Sometimes
I feel so alone
That it hurts
And sometimes
I slam the door
Sit in my corner
Reaching out for Angels
To soothe this aching pain
Crying, pleading
To why at times
I can be so naive
And yet still
Sometimes
My friends compliment me
Telling me how Sparkly
And bubbly I tend to be
Funny how I'm a walking contradiction
Lost in my own little world
And amazes me
How it all seems to surpass me
And how blind I can really be..

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

© Copyright 2002 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-09-06 11:37 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Kristen, I understand this feeling so well too, but know you are a very special person and we all love you so much and nothing can change that! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a very sensitive heartfelt write, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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2 posted 2002-09-07 07:31 PM


This is so sad. But so very well written.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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3 posted 2002-09-07 07:37 PM


I think we all can be too hard on ourselves at times. I know I am. We should accept the compliments of others and try to understand that not every day can be perfect. Well done. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2002-09-08 02:40 PM


Ceinwyn
Good thoughts, good write, good read.

Madame Chipmunk
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5 posted 2002-09-08 08:50 PM


Wouldn't it be nice if we could see each ourselves as others see us...
A very enjoyable write, Kristin.
~ Sunday night hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

A. L. Becker
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since 2002-09-06
Posts 167
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6 posted 2002-09-08 11:02 PM


dear Ceinwyn,
wow, this one went straight to my heart.  terrific.  
Annie:-

"Oh, do not ask, 'What is it?'
Let us go and make our visit."
-Eliot

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