Open Poetry #22 |
ramblings... |
Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Sometimes I can be too hard on myself And at other times I Want to take on the world And tell people off Isn't there a divine median Where tranquility And choas interjoin For once in my life Sometimes I feel so alone That it hurts And sometimes I slam the door Sit in my corner Reaching out for Angels To soothe this aching pain Crying, pleading To why at times I can be so naive And yet still Sometimes My friends compliment me Telling me how Sparkly And bubbly I tend to be Funny how I'm a walking contradiction Lost in my own little world And amazes me How it all seems to surpass me And how blind I can really be.. If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Kristen, I understand this feeling so well too, but know you are a very special person and we all love you so much and nothing can change that! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a very sensitive heartfelt write, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so sad. But so very well written. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I think we all can be too hard on ourselves at times. I know I am. We should accept the compliments of others and try to understand that not every day can be perfect. Well done. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ceinwyn Good thoughts, good write, good read. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Wouldn't it be nice if we could see each ourselves as others see us... A very enjoyable write, Kristin. ~ Sunday night hugs Lyra |
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A. L. Becker Member
since 2002-09-06
Posts 167San Francisco, California |
dear Ceinwyn, wow, this one went straight to my heart. terrific. Annie:- "Oh, do not ask, 'What is it?' |
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