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Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

0 posted 2002-09-05 07:17 PM

Dancing With A Smile

I’m dancing with a smile from you
It paints my sky in colours new
I’m flying though the air so high
Collecting rainbows from the sky
Your music holds me in its beat
I can’t resist your passion’s heat
Watch me dancing there way up high
Spinning and twirling cross the sky

I’m waltzing on a floor for two
While wrapped within the love of you
My feet don’t even touch the floor
When I’m with you I simply soar
The warm smile from your loving heart
Shows me that my true love can start
I feel magic I know its here
It touched me when you wiped my tear

My hips are swaying to your beat
I’m dancing with style watch my feet
Nothing can hold me still at all
I’m flying I don’t fear to fall
If our tomorrow cannot be
I will have your love’s memory
If I don’t have another day
I can say I loved anyway

If tomorrow’s sun shines on us
I’ll take that one day as a plus

Marsha

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-09-05 07:25 PM

Mushy dear,

I have watched you grow poetically over this
past year...and I see a lady growing as each
day passes.... Ya doin good there girl!

Love it, utterly!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2002-09-05 11:02 PM

You so eloquently captured a magical moment in time.

Linda

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-09-05 11:06 PM

Beautiful poem...
Beautiful title..
Excellent write Marsha!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-09-05 11:16 PM

(smiles) Yes, and may every day shine with sunlight to your heart! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Krissy
Senior Member

since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

5 posted 2002-09-06 10:15 AM

Mum this is excellent writing There I've praised you mum what more do you want? And where is the free verse mummy dearest? I'm waiting

You know i wub you weally

love and warm stuff
as always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

[This message has been edited by Krissy (09-06-2002 12:58 PM).]

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

6 posted 2002-09-06 10:24 AM

I love the positive outlook in these words!
Nicely done!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2002-09-06 10:26 AM

collecting rainbows
brightly colored necklaces
to adorn your neck

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2002-09-06 10:31 AM

I feel magic I know its here
It touched me when you wiped my tear

This poem is soft and lovely Marsha - enjoyed it very much. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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