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Open Poetry #22
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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
0 posted 2002-09-05 04:40 PM


Velvet Storm

you are
the whirlwind
of this velvet storm
from chaos
a new pattern
was formed
breezed
in my life
at top velocity
rearranging
a world
just for me
gentle wind
twisted trees
your name
it weaves
breathless whispers
simply fly
from leaves
and in
this moment
of breath removed
the center
of my world
has been moved
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Cpat Hair
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Member Patricius
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793
1 posted 2002-09-05 04:51 PM

what better storm indeed than one of velvet... unless it was satin...

nicely done!
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369
Deep in the heart
2 posted 2002-09-05 05:00 PM

Beautiful!
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