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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-09-05 04:09 PM


One
small step

One giant ............leap
into the world
unknown.

One heart
one mind
one life
one word
one touch

many
decisions
too
many
thoughts
and
not
enough
time
to
think.


© Copyright 2002 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-09-05 04:22 PM


You don't have enough time to think????--- Can't tell that by your writing! Your poetic brain seems to be working just fine!

I know the feeling---you hit the nail on the head with this write.

Linda

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2 posted 2002-09-05 04:27 PM


I dunno, sometimes I think it's best not to think, spur of the moment is good for me most times
Magnus
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3 posted 2002-09-05 04:28 PM


Linda,  fortunately,  I do have enough time,
in fact...probably more than I need...HA!

Writing a feel poem for a friend who is
experiencing the crunch of time and
decisions...  Such a struggle this can be..

Thanx Linda...

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4 posted 2002-09-05 04:29 PM


Dixie....why is it that this surprises me
NOT!   Hello my shadow who bumps me in the
nite...

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5 posted 2002-09-06 04:02 PM




(sigh) Oh Barry, I know just how you feel, and translating thoughts into decisions and answers is critical and that is what makes everything so complicated right now! (big hugggssssss) This is a powerful point, sweet friend, you speak with pure crystal wisdom, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2002-09-06 04:07 PM


very very clever write..
aloha, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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7 posted 2002-09-06 10:42 PM


Magnus darling heart what is this doing so far down the list? Have the PiP’s people lost their taste? Or is it simply that there are too many poems and not enough time. Very likely because everyone knows you are a superb writer. Or if they don’t they really don’t have any taste. This is utterly utterly wonderful When I think you have reached the peak of your perfection you then write something that is so perfect and full of beauty I find myself saying this is incredible. Yet again I’m scampering in here late and tardy, do you miss me when my visits are a little erratic as they are right now. I’m so busy organising things for our visit to Florida that I’ve barely got time to ummmmm sneeze. But I try to get in here for the refreshment of my soul, and to answer you. It is always worth while seeking you out darling heart, and this is exquisite writing, thank you for writing it, truly perfect I love it utterly utterly



Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

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8 posted 2002-09-07 10:02 AM



Two, to go,
for it is, too, an opportunity
and an unknown...

too much?
too soon?
to little is known
but the adventure?

Too much!

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9 posted 2002-09-07 11:31 AM


enjoyed the poem

can relate to your comment to Linda...the too much time to think part, hehe

thinking can get one into or out of trouble, but I think the too much time side is the into side

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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10 posted 2002-09-07 12:57 PM


Magnus,
You are a quick learner and dance very well.

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11 posted 2002-09-07 01:58 PM


Barry...This is wonderful!
Love the way your words dance down the page in this one!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Kethry
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12 posted 2002-09-07 07:35 PM


two to tango
is too beautiful to miss
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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13 posted 2002-09-07 07:36 PM


I love this write

Cold hands means a warm heart

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14 posted 2002-09-07 07:39 PM


Hmmmm...I'll have to think about this   Well done dear Magnus. Chris

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