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In Whispers To Your Heart
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In Whispers To Your Heart |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Soft the lusty breeze that leaves most tender from my tongue Said of fountain's shimmer by my heart and soul among This language brought about in spirit of undying fortitude Removing cloaks of satin gowns and cotton shirts in love re-viewed Soft the touch of crystal glass to pass along the inside lines Said of wonder drawn, as quick ecstatic rushes, brushed in silver fines This utterance of moaning empty nights filled to the fullest space Remitted to uncover all the blinding distant drums in pleasing pace Soft the hear and see of all there is in boundlessness to stir Said and spoken to the ear, along the lips and lines caresses purr This sound my smile in full throttle to awaken fondled and impart Remembrances of each new day to speed the motions of your heart Copyright Kkh 9/5/02 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ThisDiamond I think this would do it, lovely write. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
ThisDiamond Exquisite!! |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
This breathes romance from beginning to end, lovely... |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
this has such a lovley quality to it, very eloquent, thankyou anya |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I think that this a very magical piece of writing. I am going to read it again and savour the experience! Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-05-2002 06:11 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Exquisitely beautiful. Very well done! If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Kathleen, this is wonderful, I love it, and may these remembrances always make your days feel special and whisper to your heart with comfort! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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