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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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It comes again that feeling when nothing is wrong yet nothing is right, and it feels as though tomorrow is just a dream waiting to happen because nothing~ nothing is certain and life is just a journey traveled in hopes of someday reaching a final destination. ~A destination unknown~ Trying to get there by learning from the past and knowing that sometimes lifes lessons can be hard learned making me timid not because your love is less but because of that which is held so deep inside, and no matter how many doors are unlocked I never seem to find the right one to open to step through. Barriers remain hidden behind closed doors and I wait for that moment when the walls come crumbling down letting the light shine on a day perhaps feeling less timid and more certain in a world where there is nothing certain If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (09-05-2002 10:03 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Donna...such an honest heart-felt write. I have no words at the moment... I am speechless. ~Heart-hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Trying to get there by learning from the past and knowing that sometimes lifes lessons can be hard learned making me timid not because your love is less but because of that which is held so deep inside the essence indeed of uncertainty... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleSpirit~ One thing is for certain ... You pen as softly as you slip through open doors~  This is lovely ... and healing-from-within~ Big ole' *HUGS*~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You have so eloquently put to paper, that which many of us feel from time to time. I refer to it as my "bardo" state---where I'm in between two worlds--two states of being. It may be a necessary place for us to go once in a while---sort of a walking meditation. A time for reflection and going within. When I leave that place, it is usually into the side of the light---filled with sunshine and positive thoughts. I become pro-active and continue to move forward in life. Thank you for expressing what I have felt on occasion. May sunshine fill your day (I give our "Sunshine" a lot of plugs! Teehee! Linda |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
First, to Earth Angel...thanks for the plug. Enjoyed that particular response... Secondly, Donna. I doubt that it would occur to you that there are times you write so intimately a feeling that the reader says "she's been peeking into my life." While you may have written this for yourself, or of yourself, it seems, overall, selfless. It is a message that anyone, possibly all people, at one time or another, could say "this is me." You have touched a heartstring here, and I would hazard a guess that this will not be the last time you do so with your gentle touch, indeed, your most Gentle Spirit.... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna Like a page from under the pillow of your thoughts, this reads..yes honest and real and certainly understood by me.  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
letting the light shine on a day perhaps feeling less timid and more certain in a world where there is nothing certain Donna - Boy, can I relate to this!! Very well written sweet poetess. hugs, Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Donna, this is beautiful, I love it, may those walls be knocked town and all the uncertainty replaced with joy and satisfaction! (kiss on cheek) This is marvelous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well I got here too late, everything I was thinking has already been said, but I want to put myself in here too. Good read. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
The only certainty is death, Donna...a good reason to embrace each day with life |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
Indeed nothing is certain. What Balladeer said and more... Honest and open writing. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ya know, I am sitting here with the biggest smile on my face as I read these replies, and all I can think of is that I am blessed to be in the presence of such wonderful people here at passions. Bless you all love and peace Donna If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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