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BlueEyes
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0 posted 2002-09-05 10:27 AM



What I long for, the touch of your hand on the small of my back…
pulling me into your arms, chest to chest, for a kiss that I wish would last forever.

To feel your touch, fingers gliding so softly against my back, feels like silk.
I feel you tracing my body with your fingers, so delicate, so gentle.

Here we are, in a room full of darkness.
But your heart permits you to see what your eyes don’t allow.



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Rodney Belcher
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1 posted 2002-09-05 11:46 AM


Very nice. I like and can "see" it too. Amazing what we can experience if we use our other senses. God Bless!

Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod

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2 posted 2002-09-05 11:48 AM


But your heart permits you to see what your eyes don’t allow.
    This is lovely. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

texasrose
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3 posted 2002-09-05 12:05 PM


WOW!  Wonderful!
BlueEyes
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4 posted 2002-09-09 09:50 AM


Thank you all for taking the time to post your kind replies....

BlueEyes

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