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Of Magic Things
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Of Magic Things |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Of Magic things The moon is high and whispers sigh And wind pry’s the ear and eye. The night has spread her somber wings Enticing wed of magic things. Fantasy on phantom lawns Playing till the break of dawn Dancing to the nights enslave Hearing notes that never wave Whirling in a lively round Step to music’s haunting sound Sweep into the clouds adrift Honey suckles sweet the lift. Making liquid of your mind Peeling way the hard of rind Floating in erotic truth Wishes driven by your youth. Lost within the puppet wires All those puppets of desires  [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (09-05-2002 07:49 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh wow Sy! I saw the word 'magic' in the title and knew I would love it! You always start my mornings off on the right foot, love. Excellent write! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Seymour, this is sooooooo beautiful, I love it, and may we all be left no strings attached and free with all our dreams coming true before our very eyes! (big hugggsssssss) This is delightful, sweet friend, top of the morning to you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The moon is high and whispers sigh And wind prys the ear and eye. The night has spread her somber wings Enticing wed of magic things. Fantasy on phantom lawns Playing till the break of dawn Dancing to the nights enslave Hearing notes that never wave =============================== Sweep into the clouds adrift Honey suckles sweet the lift. Making liquid of your mind Peeling way the hard of rind ============================== Lost within the puppet wires All those puppets of desires ================================ Ahhh Stinky..this is one of your writes that all I can do as I read is smile at your wile. So many cleverly done lines of rhyme, each couplet laced with the next to create the mood and tone...and the images youve created with your words are the heart of this poem..I've said this many times before, but the impress is reborn with verses like that first one...You paint these wonderful images but you do it subtle and succinctly with just a few perfect words... you dont have to use a lot of colors and descriptive, detail words..In 4 consise lines of meter you gave us the night.. The moon is high and whispers sigh And wind prys the ear and eye. The night has spread her somber wings Enticing wed of magic things. how poetically perfect is this line and image... The night has spread her somber wings and how cool is this line... Honey suckles sweet the lift. Me thinks me needs some honeysuckles in me tea  Thank you for the morning magic   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enchantress, Glad to be able to do that, Hugs for the day. Noah, And the top of the morning to you my friend. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You butter me up like a piece of toast. Do you have me with coffee or raspbery tea? WWRS |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"The moon is high and whispers sigh"---Whispers aren't the only things that are sighing! You know, you look so much like the poet that you truly are, that when I first saw your photo, I called my daughter to come in and take a look. I asked her, doesn't he look like a poet?---and a real gentleman?. Oh, of course she concurred! That just goes to showya, a picture is worth a thousand words---and I feel privileged that I get to read yours! Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-05-2002 09:46 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 He wends the weave of make-believe caressing swift the sound of miffed for he would send me round the bend into the lands of pretend-pretend Hugging you, our Sy! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Making liquid of your mind Peeling way the hard of rind Floating in erotic truth Wishes driven by your youth Exquisite Seymour!! Morning smiles. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth angel, A flattering coment, thank you. Sunshine, Beautiful write and gif. Chris, Morning hugs back, thank you. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy Can't fine a clever in my file to tell you how you made me smile |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, No need you told me. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling heart, yet again I’m scampering in here late and tardy, do you miss me when my visits are a little erratic as they are right now. I’m so busy organising things for our visit there that I’ve barely got time to ummmmm sneeze. But I try to get in here for the refreshment of my soul, Yet again this is perfect, you know I love this utterly utterly, as always the flow of line is exquisite it really is. This really is an excellent piece from you darling heart I love it utterly utterly, This is so truly you and its wonderful. This hangs in the air like a note in a aria from Les Miserables, truly exquisite, as I said NO ONE does it like you. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire Thy coolness and they balm Let sense be dumb let flesh retire Speak through the earthquake wind and fire [This message has been edited by Marsha (09-05-2002 07:30 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A bippity boppity boo and a song of sing too as wands are wave in air with magic mystical flair A bippity boppity boo Our SY, a magician too! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, I know you are geting ready for your trip and I thank you for taking time to read my humble poem. Hope things go well And I'll see you soon. Magnus, I didn't know you went in for libations your comment was funny. |
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