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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
I met God the other night. His name was Frank, he worked in a bank. So I enquired about a loan, he told me go to hell… Somehow that didn’t seem quite right. I’m a fisherman as well, you can tell from my smell. I went up town to the R.C.M.P., then asked to buy a vowel… Private Ryan challenged me to a fight. Everybody got quiet, then went to a riot. Left me there scratching my head, dreaming of the perfect pancake. Live like it's your last day... Dance like nobody's watching... Love like you've never been hurt... [This message has been edited by bbent (09-05-2002 04:48 PM).] |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
In a weird sort of way...I like this. All I have to say is...whatever your smokin'...pass some this way...lol...God Bless! Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
LMAO I finally got my laugh of the day. This was good. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Umm! I'm still "scratching my head"! Thanks for the "Ha! Ha!" Linda |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL at this one. Ray you are on a roll...or a roller coaster? PS, Frank turned me down too! |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
My Thanks Y'all...glad you enjoyed my midnight ramblings. Live like it's your last day... |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I'm with Rodney on this one. As I read it, I thought maybe I shouldn't like it, but damn if I didn't. It was harsh and light at the same time. I enjoyed the creativity and certainly the originality. And well, I just liked it!! "I can't stay on your life support, there's a shortage in the switch"~~Pink |
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