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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-09-05 12:23 PM




I'm unable to leave home
Without my trusty pen
My mind is overflowing
With images of now and then

Many memories will resurface
As I start to reminisce
Of sun filled days in Summer
To that first lingering kiss

I am so intrigued by nature
And am often by the sea
Here there is much inspiration
As well as peace and tranquility

I often feel so passionate
About all the things I write
Ideas are constantly flowing
Even in the dead of night

My life has been enriched
By the friendships I have made
Such a bond I feel with many
Strong foundations have been laid

My emotions flow so freely
As I write from the heart
You see deep inside my soul
Of my life you are a part

So when you read my words
I hope you like what you see
For those words you are reading
Say so much about me


I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-09-05 12:24 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
2 posted 2002-09-05 12:26 PM


Hi Sue, I like what I see! Very nice write.

The White Rose~
A simple expression
of classic beauty.

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
3 posted 2002-09-05 12:37 PM


Absolutely, Sue...
The words are beautiful because they are written by a truly beautiful person...
~ hugs from my heart

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

mycafe
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since 2002-05-23
Posts 584

4 posted 2002-09-05 02:00 AM


Dear Sue, and we are all so thankful that you're sharing pieces of your heart and soul with us...through your beautiful words.  Loved this write you know!

marie

Keep counting your blessings

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise
5 posted 2002-09-05 09:20 AM


Awwww....Sue! This just ripped at my heartstrings. Beautiful my friend, just beautiful.

I drive Ron nuts (somedays) as I'm always with the pad and pen so can relate to what you've written here.

How fortunate you are to be so close to the ocean. I'm close, but have to drive through massive traffic to get to it!

Hugs, Marti

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386
Ohio, USA
6 posted 2002-09-05 10:37 AM


great write Sue - you capture the wonder of the poet - writing things that open your soul to all those who read - well done - Paul
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7 posted 2002-09-05 04:48 PM


Sue:  A fine poem and how could anyone not like what they see, when they read your work?  You are so special!

Betty Lou Hebert

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8 posted 2002-09-05 11:52 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, and every single time I read your gorgeous words I always love what I write as your golden heart is always shimmering with true love! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

passing shadows
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9 posted 2002-09-06 12:01 PM


yep, I always love what I read from you...very nicely done...thanks for sharing pieces of you
Magnus
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10 posted 2002-09-06 04:29 PM


Beautiful Sue,  not only do they say a lot
about you,  but they say a lot to us...about
us and you...  Thanx my Down Under the world
friend...

Zall
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since 2002-08-25
Posts 214
London, England
11 posted 2002-09-06 08:04 PM


Very Nice,

Zall

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