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Too Much Beer
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Too Much Beer |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA 
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Over the years You drink so much beer My dear Your liver goes bad How sad When your only 40 And your on your death bed Your liver stops working Then your kidneys go into failure Why drink so much When you know it will kill ya All your loved ones stand by your bed As your heart fails And you slip away All because you couldn't control your drinking habit When it could be done Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Don't worry about it.  What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This isn't about you, Julie...is it? Its a good poem but I hope its fictional...  ~ hugs from my heartLyra |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Julie I am hoping that this wasn't written about someone close to you but your words were so heartfelt that I feel they were. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) I am zero-tolerant on drugs and alcohol and it breaks my heart to see when people are sad to destroy their bodies on beer and those items! (sad sigh) My heart goes out to him and others who have drinking problems, sweet friend, God Bless your compassionate heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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