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wranx
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since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

0 posted 2002-09-04 11:05 PM

In the beginning

I found her there
mingled among her musings.

No more than glimpses.
A glow
from within her poetry
compelled consideration.

My own thoughts
here brought
to new life
in her own words.

Tentative threads
of acceptance
meet, mingle and twist.
Twine into tenuous bond.

Binding heart and mind
with little more
than the strength
of strings.

Yet, persevered.

Pour tu, Etoile
Je t'adore
~Ed

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".

~wranx~

© Copyright 2002 E.F.Rose - All Rights Reserved

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-09-04 11:05 PM

Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2002-09-04 11:08 PM

Wranx

She is bright, this star...and has touched me also..as does your poem.

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

3 posted 2002-09-05 12:34 PM

here's to the perseverence
of it!
like strings...
mmmm
brian

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

4 posted 2002-09-05 12:40 PM

A very lovely love poem, Wranx...
Do wranx's fall in love?

~ hugs from a chipmunk

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

bsquirrel

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2002-09-05 12:48 PM

C'est bien pour vous et votre etoile.

It's been way too long since I've so much as looked at French -- in a book or anywhere. Hence, it's awful.

Your poem, however... definitely not.

Mekeeey

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (09-05-2002 12:49 AM).]

WhileIWasGone
Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 486

6 posted 2002-09-05 05:28 PM

Ed....

This is beautiful...thank you. Any girl would be lucky to have a man like you write such beautiful poems for her...smooches.

Sh'teme
Heather

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