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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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0 posted 2002-09-04 10:50 PM


Life is a joyful thing
You find love
And you pass it on
For generation after generation
And on down the line

Life can also be many a sad thing
But just remember
The good always out weighs the bad
And life goes on
Even though your sad

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
1 posted 2002-09-04 11:15 PM


How true it all is.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
2 posted 2002-09-05 12:41 PM


And when the world
goes on while sad
darn if it don't
make me mad.

True Julie, life does go on. There is some comfort in that after all. Nice write.

The White Rose~
A simple expression
of classic beauty.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2002-09-05 08:59 AM


Loner---This has such a positive message--wise words--good advice! I enjoyed this poem of yours very much!

Linda

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2002-09-05 09:14 AM


yes, truthful. I liked this one, gives me a little hope.
Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-09-06 03:58 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Julie, this reminded me so much of that John Melencamp song "Jack and Diane" and how life goes on but you can always do the best you can! (kiss on cheek) This is a wonderful truth, sweet friend, I am a witness of this because I used to be depressed everyday now I am happier, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
6 posted 2002-09-06 04:02 PM


As always enjoyed your sweet vision penned.
ThisDiamond

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