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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2002-09-04 07:32 PM


I have thrown my seeds high up into the air
To let the winds disperse the thoughts
In the flights of independent thinking
Letting the currents of time
Choose their delicate landing

As if an excitant father
I wait anxiously for the germination
That will reach out to implant its visions
Into the depth of fertile minds
Who want to blossom
In an ever changing environment
    
In the moisture of every morning’s rebirth
Seeking out the horizon’s edges
In the flight of rainbow wings
That will carpet the terrain
In gentle renewal
That will germinate the soils beauty

So as everything flowers within their own seasons
Eventually the time will come for everyone
To stand so darn tall that nature bows
Sending their prayers within special blessings
To an existence seeded in exhilaration
Into the disbursement of changing winds
Of your true purpose

D.Lester Young 9/4/2002
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)



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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2002-09-04 07:42 PM


I am at a loss on how to respond to your beautiful thoughts..so I will just let the feeling  settle inside me...where I can enjoy the moment of your words.

*s
M

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2002-09-04 07:48 PM


Nakdthoughts---What an eloquent response to an incredibly eloquent poem! My sentiments exactly!

Linda

Rodney Belcher
Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227
Taylor, Michigan
3 posted 2002-09-05 11:44 AM


Very profound...even your words on critiques are deep! Man I would love to have a long conversation with you! God Bless!

Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod

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