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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2002-09-04 06:53 PM





Come with me I'll take you strolling
through my garden in early mist
White blanket layed upon the earth
As if beyond nothing else exits



A late rose still shows her beauty
many spiders passed her by
Soon her petals will fall under
but now she's reaching for the sky



Until snow she will show flowers
comes in yellow and orange too
she's a persistant little creature
always finding her way through


Spider's season is the Autumn
woven webs to catch some food
Silver threads throughout the garden
eightleg creatures with a patient mood



Our ways will part at this blue bush
I hope you'll come back another time
Then I'll invite you on a winterstroll
through my gardenpictures on rhyme


Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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1 posted 2002-09-04 07:04 PM


Titia ~ That was simply beautiful, both in rhyme and grapic content, except for the yucky spiders One day, yes one day, I will stroll that garden with you - just you wait and see.  This was lovely and so well presented.  Into my library see goes.

The most valuable thing you own is a smile, wear it, and share it.
Sharon    

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2 posted 2002-09-04 07:15 PM




YAY!!! Awwwwwwww, I love your wonderful garden, the silk snow white rose made me smile just as I can't wait to see your garden in wnter, yippee! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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