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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2002-09-04 06:16 PM

What moves me this way?
Tis not the thunder from heaven
that causes this tremble
till I in weak kneed fashion
can not stand without shake.
Tis not the quake of ground
causing these hands unsteady

but in my reach
to caress tender breast
or supple thigh
I am wracked twould seem
with palsied limbs

Stars should not in times of norm
be seen so brightly at noon
the time when shadows are gone from human sight
to lie in the regions hidden from prying eyes
but indeed they explode on my visions

let me now
touch you again

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2002-09-04 06:28 PM

I loved the phrase 'palsied hands' it gives the image of age.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2002-09-04 06:29 PM

Okay! tehehe

Linda

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

3 posted 2002-09-04 06:39 PM

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh myyyyyyyyyyyyy...helen

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

4 posted 2002-09-04 07:36 PM

the time when shadows are gone from human sight
to lie in the regions hidden from prying eyes
but indeed they explode on my visions

Sweet and sensual, a lovely read.

Battle not with monsters lest ye become a monster, and if you gaze into the abyss, the abyss gazes also into you. - Friedrich W. Nietzsche

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-09-04 07:41 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, I have missed your lovelt words so much, this is a beautiful star-spangled return, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2002-09-04 08:14 PM

Dang. Not only do you come back with one, but a double-whammy, and this one, Sir, took away my breath.

What a delightful way to go....

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-09-04 08:25 PM

Oooooooh Yeeeeeessss!!!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2002-09-04 09:22 PM

You have such a keen eye when it comes to a good storm front, and how they have a way of invading our senses. Interestingly enough I have a poem in progress that touches on the quiver and quake and the emotions they evoke...but you beat me to the punch! And since lightening only strikes once...I will rework it until it becomes my own.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2002-09-04 09:26 PM

Cpat

sensual and emotive storm inside and out!

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

10 posted 2002-09-05 01:13 AM

It's damn good to have you back, Cpat.

Me

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2002-09-05 09:19 AM

very tender and endearing, enjoyed the read

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

12 posted 2002-09-05 12:53 PM

Keep your hands to yourself, big boy!
I love it, rascal

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

13 posted 2002-09-05 01:58 PM

Gentle...as always. Bob

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

14 posted 2002-09-05 03:00 PM

What could one say to such wonderful poetry that hasn't been said...well other than DANG!!! why can't I have someone that writes so tenderly about me????

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

15 posted 2002-09-06 11:46 AM

I'm with JellyBeans on this.....
beautiful....

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

16 posted 2002-09-12 09:21 AM

The collection keeps getting better and better...

loved this...

~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

17 posted 2002-09-12 09:33 AM

Enjoyed your "storms of thought"

Earth Angel

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

18 posted 2002-09-12 10:27 AM

Is this why I get energized by thunder storms? powerful poetry, electrifying right through the blue screen.

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