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Magician
Member

since 2002-08-14

Posts 126

0 posted 2002-09-04 04:10 PM

Constantly, constantly
Thoughts in my head
Voices speaking eternally
Cannot get away from
Thoughts in my head
Been such a long time
Since there was a truce
To the war in my mind
The raging of images
Somewhere lies the truth
Pain stricken, aching heart
Soul and body as one
Cannot separate the parts
Only to realize in times like this
After already come undone
Constantly, constantly
Feeling like some misfit
Eternally, eternally
Trying to quit,
Letting life live me
And not living it

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2002-09-04 04:12 PM

Sorry I missed your debut at Passions.
Welcome!
I enjoyed this piece

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2002-09-04 04:14 PM

.."Letting life live me and not living it..."

I know what that's like! Until we take control of the helm and plot a course---we'll just drift around aimlessly on the Sea of Life!

Linda

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-04-2002 04:16 PM).]

Magicmystery
Senior Member

since 2002-02-13

Posts 821
Windsor, Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2002-09-04 04:18 PM

An interesting write, and internal battle..... Have you considered medication (just joking) loved the poem....was it about some specific dilemma?

sherry

Magician
Member

since 2002-08-14

Posts 126

4 posted 2002-09-04 04:22 PM

Interloper, thanks for reading.

EA, I can't believe you picked out my favorite line from the poem. Thank you so much for thinking like I do...no, its a good thing.

Sherry, it is about a specific dilema, but I'm not telling. *S* Thank you.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-09-04 04:42 PM

Ah come on...tell me what your dilemma is

Excellent write...enjoyed the read.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-09-04 08:19 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Magician, please, we are all here for you, feel free to release these thoughts if you need to and know you are loved by many as it would only hurt letting them continue to consume you! (sigh) All our hearts go out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magician, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

7 posted 2002-09-05 08:21 AM

This had a sense of urgency about it and I don't know if that's what you planned but if so, it worked
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2002-09-05 08:56 AM

I can relate bigtime

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2002-09-05 09:03 AM

Now, you went and titled this with two of my favorite words, "somewhere" and "within"...now why hadn't I thought of a title with such drawing power?

And then, the poem.

Magic,

indeed!

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