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Krawdad
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0 posted 2002-09-04 12:58 PM


She’s . . .

    
She’s changed you know
I’ve watched the flow
while standing by
through bitter cry
had not intended
but helped, amended
knew not I’d find
she’d soothe my mind
her hardened mettle
became a petal
go look at how
she’s blooming now





©  090402

"Grab a pen, grab some paper, do yourself a little favor."    e

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WhiteRose
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1 posted 2002-09-04 01:13 PM


I like this very much. Nicely done.

The White Rose~
A simple expression
of classic beauty.

anya
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2 posted 2002-09-04 01:17 PM


this is...lovley, I thought it had a nice flow about it,
anya

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3 posted 2002-09-04 03:55 PM


By your photo, you look like the strong and silent-type of man who could wrestle a grizzly bear with one hand tied behind his back!----but these words, these gentle words of love...are you sure you posted the right photo!

Linda


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4 posted 2002-09-04 04:08 PM


Excellent E,
Much enjoyed!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Martie
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5 posted 2002-09-04 04:58 PM


Krawdad

Sometimes two can soothe eachother.  When it happens, it's so good!  This was tenderly written.

1slick_lady
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6 posted 2002-09-04 08:18 PM


e...this is a cooling caress of a heated day...h
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7 posted 2002-09-04 08:44 PM




(sigh) This is so beautifully touching, sweet friend, I love the feel of your words, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet E.J, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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