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Love At First Sight (16.000TH Post)
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Love At First Sight (16.000TH Post) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(Dedicated to my sweet love of my life, Joanna!  ) Love At First Sight By: Noah Eaton 9/4/02 Mother used to say to me, "If a child learns with acceptance and friendship, he'll learn to find love in the world!" At first I felt I wasn't deserving Then I saw your eyes, and the heavens gleamed Now every night I smile and sigh Dreaming of holding you like a teddy bear And softly weeping like puppies cuddled up close Strumming the lyre of your hair... And the honeybees swam until they got dizzy On this dance floor of life baroque angels started singing The stars shined in your eyes that would make Venus and Adonis melt and sigh That's when I knew it was love at first sight... These halls used to be crooked and empty Now they sparkle like a Puerto Vallarta vendana when you turn me on You've exchanged my walls I've cried on for Sheratons You've converted this Stonehedge to a palace I belly-dance now to your every rhythm Bounty of destiny, goddess of my life You are my reason, soul, zen, reika My second wind, my second star to the right And the lilies bloomed in the night Your smile filled my mind, it tantalized Whatever you want to be, I will always love you in delight Because with you every day feels like love at first sight... When you kiss me Parakeets twitter dreamily When you hold me Canaries blush with cheeks of strawberries and cream... And the white doves embraced us like a cotton blanket Heaven is missing an angel and I feel so lucky you're the one And you smother my face in cranberry kisses that fill me with squeals of boyish delight It is love at first sight... God must have stayed up all night Spending more time, drenching your lips in wine I'll always be yours, you will always be mine It's love at first sight... "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-04-2002 07:37 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"If a child learns with acceptance and friendship, he'll learn to find love in the world!"----You listened well, my friend! Kudos for this incredible piece of P-O-E-T-R-Y and on reaching such an incredible milestone---16,000 posts!!! Linda |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
I'm sooo happy for you Noah!! I hope everyday of your life you feel like this. Heaven is missing an angel and I feel so lucky you're the one And you smother my face in cranberry kisses that fill me with squeals of boyish delight It is love at first sight... Heaven's not missing only ONE angel, Noah... I think it's missing TWO!! Peace,love,light and happiness Tammy |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
"I belly-dance now to your every rhythm Bounty of destiny, goddess of my life You are my reason, soul, zen, reika My second wind, my second star to the right" This is so beautiful, Noah. You have painted a very lovely picture of your beloved here. Much Happiness to you both and congradulations on your 16000 post!!!! I gotta ask one question...Do you ever sleep? Love, Light and Peace, Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today. [This message has been edited by Magicmystery (09-04-2002 12:14 PM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
 Congratulations Noah!! A beautiful tribute to the love of your life. hugs, Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Happy 16,000 and the very best for you and your lady |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
At first glance, this is beauty, poetically personified. Hmm....upon closer inspection..... mmmmmm its wonderful, Noah! Lines that cling together; phrasing meant to be. jeff Love those diverse images you dream of *s* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is beautiful sidekick!! Congrats on your 16,000th post!! WAY TO GO NOAH!! ~Hugs and Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Congratulations on 16,000 beautiful and loving posts here, Noah.... And a very beautiful poem....  ~ lots and lots of congratulatory hugsLyra |
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Singing Sparrow Member
since 2002-05-12
Posts 94 |
I think it is about time this poem gets a much-deserved push...back up to the top where it belongs!!! You are so special to us all and a treasure like this deserves much more notice!!! CONGRATULATIONS!!! SS[This message has been edited by Singing Sparrow (09-05-2002 07:28 PM).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Gosh Noah, 16,000! This is beautiful, I know how it feels to love so much. Sandra |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awwww Noah, this is a beautiful poem. Congradulations on your 16,000 post. |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
CONGRATULATIONS ON 16,000!!!!!! A truly wonderful dedication to an amazing love! You are SUCH a WONDERFUL person, Noah!!  Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Wow, Noah! It only seems such a short time ago I was congratulating you on your 15,000th post. You never cease to amaze me with the depth of feelings you have for your Joanna. I hope you are blessed with the love you so truly deserve. This is for you my friend : "Like the shade of a great tree in the noonday heat is a friend. Like the home port with your country's flag flying after a long journey is a friend. A friend is an inpregnable citadel of refuge in the strife of existence." and this ...... "A man without friends is like a left hand without a right." Take care my friend......Sue I am in motion |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Noah, congratulations on your 16,000th post. Just amazing! It's wonderful watching a love story in motion. |
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Singing Sparrow Member
since 2002-05-12
Posts 94 |
(((BUMP))) I can't believe this doesn't already have so many, you are one wonderful underrated treasure here! Back up you go!!! SS |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Congrats Noah!!! This is good for your 16,000th post. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Good stuff...congratulations on 16,000 posts...James |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Noah...Congratulations on 16,000  So what will you do for an encore? LOL Keep all the beautiful poems coming...Paul |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ah Noah, this is just lovely. Congratulations on an incredible milestone. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Noah~ this is so lovely, and so tenderly written.....what a beautiful expression.... HUGSSSS Lauren~ I need some distraction |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Belated but heart felt kudus for your 16000th post.PIP is bless with your beautiful words. paladin |
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TradingSpaces19 Member
since 2002-08-31
Posts 134Arvada, Colorado |
Congratulations Noah on your 16,000 post. your poetry is just awesome. thanx for sharing. Love, Andrea |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Very Beautiful....enjoyed very much. DeaDiAmore |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Well... Noah, my friend... I have missed this one... once maybe twice, maybe thrice... but have managed to find it, read it, and be amazed by it... This is excellent stuff... fantastic... I loved this part particularly These halls used to be crooked and empty Now they sparkle like a Puerto Vallarta vendana when you turn me on You've exchanged my walls I've cried on for Sheratons You've converted this Stonehedge to a palace I belly-dance now to your every rhythm Bounty of destiny, goddess of my life You are my reason, soul, zen, reika My second wind, my second star to the right … … And congratulations on the 16000 as well... I have lost count of how many of those were the such wonderful replies to my writings... you do have a kind heart... Thanks for everything; most of all for your presence in these blue halls of friendship... Regards, sudhir |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - my friend, you sure have it bad. It's a wonderful feeling to be in love, and to write about it. You do it very well. I believe you and she will see each other soon... BC |
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