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HopeS
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0 posted 2002-09-04 09:25 AM



Rainbow Reflections

Rainbows casting refections
Arching glow across the sky
On the one end there sat you
At the other end , there sat I

Imagining I could slide across
Over the rainbow to the end
There to find a heart of gold
Sweet love of my dear friend

A rainbow shone connection
Like a bridge from me to you
It appears joined by sunlight
When grey skies turn to blue

Their arrival after rainstorms
All became so evident to me
Love can slide on rainbows
Brightly arching over the sea

A colourful spectrum of light
Reflecting the beauty above
In stretching shore to shore
Shone in heart to heart love

HopeĀ©2002

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1 posted 2002-09-04 09:45 AM


Hope, really, really like this line, it's such a sweet thought:

Love can slide on rainbows

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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Member Patricius
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2 posted 2002-09-04 09:50 AM


Hope - You always compose such touching poems. This one is utterly beautiful. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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3 posted 2002-09-04 09:10 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, and may the rainbow of his heart always shine from his shore to yours in romantic harmony! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is colorfully whimsical, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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