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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2002-09-04 08:23 AM


Popsicles of grape
And strawberry cotton candy
--Sweet tastes of summer

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-04-2002 01:32 PM).]

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VAS
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1 posted 2002-09-04 09:18 AM


Maybe sweet scents...but these enliven my tongue more than my nose.

Great poem! I think you'd call this one a senyru since it's not about nature.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2002-09-04 09:27 AM


VAS---What would I do without you! I stand corrected. Thanks again. I'll make the edit!

I hope you're not going to start charging me for all the wonderful advice and guidance you give me!

Linda

N orth Carolina Girl
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3 posted 2002-09-04 11:13 AM


Earth Angel,

My grandson loves grape popsicicles.

Juanita
"Live,Love and Laugh"

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2002-09-04 11:21 AM


VAS--I just reread your reply---and darned if you're not right---again! Of course, the tongue would be the sense organ most affected, so I'm replacing "scents" with "tastes"----There now, that's much better! Keep dropping by!----P-l-e-a-s-e!!

Linda

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5 posted 2002-09-04 12:07 PM


*mmmmm...licking my lips*.. as I finish reading this little tongue tickler. Are you trying to make me fatter? I have a sudden urge to eat grape popsicles for lunch!!Wonderful as always Linda!
Tammy

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2002-09-04 12:14 PM


Tammy---I love your "sweet" replies!

BTW, popsicles are only about 70 calories for a whole one, and 35 for a half----and if they're made with aspartaine---only about 5 calories each! So feel free to have one for lunch---guilt free!

Linda

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7 posted 2002-09-04 01:15 PM


sounds like lots of fun
could it be the county fair
my taste buds don't care

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

WhiteRose
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8 posted 2002-09-04 01:22 PM


A delicious little poem

The White Rose~
A simple expression
of classic beauty.

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2002-09-04 01:30 PM


Interloper---I enjoyed your 'senyruic' (???)
reply. I'm honoured to have a poem written for me by the illustrious, Dr. Love (Gawd! I hope that's your nickname---I've been getting
a few things screwed up lately!)

Lots of Laughter
Linda

Earth Angel
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10 posted 2002-09-04 01:31 PM


WhiteRose---and that was a delicious little reply! Thank you!

Linda

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11 posted 2002-09-04 08:36 PM


kettle corn poppin'
and don't forget to halt for
the ice cream truck man



YAY!!! Mmmmmmmm...you are making me hungry, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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12 posted 2002-09-04 10:32 PM


Marge is gonna love this. Grape, her favorite!!!

Ahhhh, summer.  Marti

Earth Angel
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13 posted 2002-09-04 10:43 PM


Noah---what a wonderful senyruic reply. I love it. Thank you so much, dear heart!

Linda

Earth Angel
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14 posted 2002-09-04 10:47 PM


Marti---could you go and find Marge for me? Tell her I'll share my last grape popsicle with her!

Linda

Earth Angel
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15 posted 2002-09-04 10:51 PM


North Carolina Girl---Sorry I missed your reply---I just now noticed it. Since your grandson loves grape popsicles, I'll split my last one between him and Marge!

Linda

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