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Autistically speaking...
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Autistically speaking... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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And now, I do not wish to talk-- I am a silent child again rocking in a hallway, locked hugging knees to quivered chin. I close my ears to "where are you?" I am a silent child again blocking sight of world in rock fearing bite from friendly grin. It is my last defense... |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Oh, I know this feeling so well. Spent much of my marriage like this. Sometimes we’ve got to take our defenses where we can get them. Great title K…sums it up perfectly. You can never win or lose |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, That's one way to do it. Clever and good write.  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ The title is perfection~ Conjures up a not-so-perfect image~ I like this one for the depth of thought it leaves~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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LRbaba Junior Member
since 2002-05-07
Posts 30Dallas, Texas, |
rocking, rocking, this rocks on the rocks send the socks talent mocks the crowing cocks *smile |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I'll take mine on the rocks please, with a twist of humor... hope the bad times aren't too bad, and the good times are too good |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Tracey---um...yep, it's a habit of mine since childhood, I can "go silent" to such an extreme sometimes, that they feared I WAS autistic---hell, I just wanted to be left alone, yanno?  of course you do! Thanks for reading, lovie!sy...it was never something I thought about...thanks dawlin' for the "clever"  Marge, thank you for popping in, I miss our late night "ping-pong" forum play! (That IS FORUM play, people!)  So many poets, so little time...love to you, m.o.m.s.LR? thank you for the rock--wish I could help with the roll...but I be barefoot these days. Thanks to all. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
AHHHHHH....I missed you, and I mean I REALLY missed you!!!! Big UNSERENE bear hug! now post something beautiful? |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Sen, Sad, huddling words -- yr defense is the world's score. Mikey |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I have a cousin that is austistic and this sounds very much like his behavior. Nicely written! |
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Zall Member
since 2002-08-25
Posts 214London, England |
a good sensitive write, most people bury there heads in the sand, autistic or not. Good Piece Zall |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Hey Kar. power words as always. Huge hugs. Keep a look out for the rainbow, there is one after every storm, take care of yourself, ok. Battle not with monsters lest ye become a monster, and if you gaze into the abyss, the abyss gazes also into you. - Friedrich W. Nietzsche |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
karen...... silent *touch* b |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hugs m'friend Maree |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I had read this a couple times before but going through I didn't comment...but I wanted to let you know how this touched me, how truthful, how deep...how I can relate now, as always |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Another keeper! Well done, indeed |
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