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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-09-04 06:21 AM



Foundation Of Love

A relationship is built on the grounds of trust,
a bond made of faith is more than a must.
Designed to rest upon pillars of understanding,
without limitations, and with no demanding.
The mortar is mixed with sharing and passion,
stirred together well with caring and compassion.
A structure built with room for compromise,
void of jealousy, fear, and lies.
All of these things complete the blueprints of,
a relationship built upon a foundation of love.



(C) 02-22-00 dmsmith


If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (09-04-2002 06:49 AM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-09-04 06:43 AM



The mortar is stirred
the bricks, in place
my hand in yours,
lips face to face...

Donna, you know I'm smiling here!

anya
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2 posted 2002-09-04 06:48 AM


how very true! but put in a very eloquent way,
anya

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3 posted 2002-09-04 08:54 AM


Perfectly beautiful Donna!
How very very true.
Love this piece.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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4 posted 2002-09-04 09:01 AM


Oh, the wisdom and the gentleness of your words...
Please write more of your "blueprints"---the world would be a better place.

Linda

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5 posted 2002-09-04 09:57 AM


Love this Donna and it going into my library!! hugs, Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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6 posted 2002-09-04 10:18 AM


How true sweet lady, how very true.......you always continue to inspire and amaze me.....



Lauren~

The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket
I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy

Martie
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7 posted 2002-09-04 10:20 AM


Beautiful and true words, Donna.  
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8 posted 2002-09-04 05:57 PM


Donna, I am also smiling.   Words of wisdom and of truth here.  Well done, my friend. *hugs*
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9 posted 2002-09-04 07:44 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I just love this, sweet friend, yes, may your hearts always be covered in Plaster of Paris and block out the tears that don't deserve to be shed and may nothing but happiness fill your heart! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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10 posted 2002-09-04 11:01 PM


This is so true, Donna. This is a wonderful poem. To me, trust is the main thing.
BluesSerenade
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11 posted 2002-09-04 11:10 PM


These are some choice words Donna~
and so very true!
  *bravo* girl~

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12 posted 2002-09-04 11:39 PM


I appreciate these beautiful words...

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

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