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......Soul Reading.......(dedicated to Interloper)
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......Soul Reading.......(dedicated to Interloper) |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach 
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ in awe of your words my heart begs me to read on glimpsing your sweet soul. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This is dedicated to Interloper, a wonderful poet and gentle man who told me "you can do anything." Thankyou dear sir. Chris B. Sept.3,2002 [This message has been edited by Nightshade (09-03-2002 06:16 PM).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sweet words, for a special doctor.  Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This was very sweet of you Chris... And ya know...I'll just bet Interloper would make a great doctor with his kind and caring demeanor... Very thoughtful of you to dedicate this to him, as I'm sure he will love it! ~Hugs, Teed~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sandra - thankyou for reading and commenting. NancyLee - thanks for the "little push" and for liking this tiny offering. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A superb Senryu! Chris, you're so wonderful for showing so much determination in all you do. No wonder we think so much of you! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Karilea - as always, thankyou for your kind words. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Chris - believe it, you can do anything. Go get it, and don't look back... BC |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
A senyru is the best way to express your feelings.Like the simple phrase "thank you" speaks more effectivly than a hundred words of gratitude. paladin |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Bill - thanks for the encouraging words and for reading.  paladin - Yes, I believe you are correct dear poet. Thankyou for stopping by. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay, yes, and he is 100% right, you can do anything if you believe in yourself with a beautiful loving heart like yours you are destined to find true joy! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Noah - you are such a joy! Thanks sweetie. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
a very nice tribute and wonderfully shared. Your poem reveals a caring soul and evokes caring feelings - thanks Paul |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Paul - what a kind response to my little Senryu. Thanks!! Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Chris A few words can say so much...this is lovely and a testiment to their power to touch. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Dear Martie, thankyou for popping in to take a peek. Yes, "less is more" as they say. hugs to you. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Chris what a beautiful senryu and a wonderful tribute to a caring soul. Wonderful writing sweetie, hugs to you. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Donna - how kind of you to take the time to read and comment. hugs Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I fight through my tears to see the keyboard below I search for the words ~*~ your self-described work "just a little senryu" is a monument ~*~ yet small in it's size when compared to your sweet heart strong and courageous ~*~ you can do it all anything you wish to do you now believe that ~*~ you have shown the world stand tall and hold your head proud YOU ARE A WINNER Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, dearest Interloper, now I am in tears. How beautiful of a response is this? I am not deserving of such kind words. Thankyou kind poet.....thankyou. Big Hugs. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You ARE deserving and it's about time you understood that Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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