navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #22 » What It Takes
Open Poetry #22
Post A Reply Post New Topic What It Takes Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Krishankins
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972
Texas

0 posted 2002-09-06 10:55 PM


I broke my foot today giving my all in a game that we ended up losing. Yet I wasn't the one who quit. I kept playing, ignoring the pain. My teammates gave up, and cost us the game. That hurt the most.

                


When you give your all, and still you lose
Don't walk away in shame
In times like these, it's when you learn
What it takes to win the game




Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

[This message has been edited by Krishankins (09-06-2002 10:56 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Kristopher Hankins - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2002-09-06 10:59 PM


I'm so sorry to hear that you broke your foot Kris.
Hope it heals quickly....
Good write though.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
2 posted 2002-09-06 11:06 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Kristopher, I'm so sorry you broke your foot, sweet friend, even if you lost I know you have made your whole team proud as you give it 110%! (sigh) We're all so proud of you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

PoetryIsLife
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763
...in my boxers...
3 posted 2002-09-07 12:51 PM


*grins* Another great piece. What (sort of) game?

Sincerely,
Titus

"I'll prepare myself, and one day my time will come."
            -Abraham Lincoln

Krishankins
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972
Texas
4 posted 2002-09-07 03:12 AM


Thanks you guys.
By the way Titus, it was softball. I was sliding into third. The bag was suppose to give away, but it didn't, my foot did.
I just got back from the ER. I sat there for 2 hours and didn't get seen by a doctor, so I just left. You have to love Navy medicine!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
5 posted 2002-09-07 10:00 AM



Sorry that your teammates let you down...
now go take care of yourself...
and later?  Surround yourself with a team
that won't let YOU down!

WhiteRose
Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
6 posted 2002-09-07 10:03 AM


OUCH! I know that hurts. Nice poem Kris. Sometimes it takes more than we should have to give to win.
VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
7 posted 2002-09-07 11:25 AM


Gosh, so did you get an x-ray at least? Do you have a cast or something? Why did you leave? Okay, I'm a mother, what can I say?

Good things come to those who wait,
and wait, and wait.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
8 posted 2002-09-07 12:08 PM


Wise words, that should be heeded by all.

I'll send you loving healing energy 'cross the miles!

P.S.---I'm glad it wasn't your hand that got broken! I wouldn't want anything to interfere with your writing and posting!

Take Care
Linda

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #22 » What It Takes

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary