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One and the Same
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One and the Same |
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Magician Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 126 |
Beautiful mind And beautiful spirit One who will not be tamed All my thoughts And all my desires I shall in thee name For thinking thus And for what I feel I shall know no shame How free thou art Yet also in spite thereof, I shall now proclaim All that I have before me And all that I wanted, Are one and the same |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magician Not magic but enjoyed. |
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Magician Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 126 |
Sey...um...thank you? |
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alterego Member
since 2002-02-23
Posts 113Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
Liked this very much I especially liked the way you carried the rhyme throughout, but also that the person you wrote this for should be indeed flattered. Such loving compliments. Good work. Sheila  Create something infinite today - Smile!!! |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very, very nice. Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How delicately and softly spoken in such a sensual tone. Beautifully penned! Fortunate lady. ~ Magical Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Sooooo beautifully roantic, sweet friend, I love it, I wish for the one's love for you to always be the same and grow every day with joy! (sigh) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magician, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Magician, this "All that I have before me And all that I wanted, Are one and the same" is the way of truth and a wonderful flourish to finish the poem on. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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