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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2002-09-03 07:35 AM


Variable

Variables are molded skills
Made from parents early wills.
Distilled from ancient barley corn
From out the parents they were born.

And so it goes until today
The stage the same and so the play
Reactions to a closed abyss
Some denied and some are kissed.

And why is not an option
Parented or for adoption.
We all must do the best we can
Within our time of given span.

So play me not the song of sad
Or the bagpipes of lass or lad
But bear unto the winds that flow
And genuflect to life and blow.

In other words you have one chance
So pick the beat and start to dance.

© Copyright 2002 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2002-09-03 07:44 AM


In other words you have one chance
So pick the beat and start to dance.

...

I can't dance, but heck... I will try anyway... are you dancing?

Great writing, Seymour, my friend...

Regards,
Sudhir

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2 posted 2002-09-03 07:54 AM




(big hugggssssss) Yes, yes, and may we all make the most of this one chance and rather than see everything as a variable and question why just understand the coefficient works! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, I always love your morning reads, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2002-09-03 08:25 AM


Sudhir,
We are all metaphorically dancing my friend,
thank you for the read and reply.

Noah,
Thank you for the understand.

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4 posted 2002-09-03 08:29 AM


I have just a minute or two ...
so I came to dance with you.
My day lacks without your rhymes ...
I need your wisdom divine to define.

Lets sip some tea and unwind in kind ...
cadenced conversation with minds entwined.



*winkiwinkie*




You keep writing this cool...
and Randys dance card will be full.  

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2002-09-03 08:33 AM


JM,
As long as your on the top and on the bottom
of the card.
Stinky Randy,

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6 posted 2002-09-03 08:57 AM


Ah the dance of life Sy..
one step forward and two steps back..
I wouldn't have missed it for the world.
Loved this morning read from you...
~Morning hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2002-09-03 09:01 AM


Enchantress
Just keep dancing,

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8 posted 2002-09-03 09:32 AM


Lovely dance Sir......keeps my feet moving....

Lauren~

The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket
I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2002-09-03 09:35 AM


Lauren,
That's the whole idea, thank you.

ecrivan
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10 posted 2002-09-03 10:19 AM


do the best while we can...well done Sy


Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2002-09-03 10:41 AM


ecrivan
I think we all try to do that. Thank you

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12 posted 2002-09-03 10:46 AM


SEY,
  This was quite enjoyable!
I was dancing to the wrong beat for a while, but got it together now!It wouldn't have taken so long if I'd been dancing with you.
Your words are priceless!!!


Kitty

* That which gives light, must endure burning *

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2002-09-03 10:49 AM


Kitty,
Your reply is priceless.

Martie
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14 posted 2002-09-03 10:56 AM


Sy

I dance..with my shadow across the day
and in the night with bed at lay

Loved this!

Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2002-09-03 11:00 AM


Martie,

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16 posted 2002-09-04 06:45 AM



For choice is yours, as is free will
Liquid moves...do not be still!

Sorry I'm a day late, Sy...it was a busy one, believe me!

Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2002-09-04 07:20 AM


Sunshine,
How could I be sorry about the bump.

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