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Open Poetry #22

Hushes Quick Silver

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2002-09-06 10:27 PM

As I hold you here against me
To Rock Upon the cresting waves
Unending slips before me
Upon quick silver
Drops the moon

Copyright Kkh 9/6/02

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

1 posted 2002-09-06 10:44 PM

I see a cradle in the sea. This is so beautiful!!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-09-06 11:01 PM

Absolutely beautiful!!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-09-06 11:03 PM

(smiles) Oh Kathleen, this is wonderful, I love it, may these gentlr whispers always fill your heart with joy, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2002-09-06 11:54 PM

Short, extremely delicious and powerful...

Nicely done Kathy....

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

5 posted 2002-09-07 12:26 PM

So very lush with imagery, Kathy...
especially for such a short piece.
It reminds me of what my mother used to say
"good things come in small packages"

~ hugs and smiles

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

6 posted 2002-09-07 07:54 AM

This quicksilvered away....
TD...you have a gift...

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2002-09-08 09:45 PM

Unending slips before me~

what a nice line that is to set aside..
Thank you for that thought!!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2002-09-09 12:11 PM

"Upon quick silver drops the moon"
---the kind of line that bears repeating---and thinking upon.

Earth Angel

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