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Open Poetry #22

Poor Baby

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-09-02 10:43 PM

I look at the TV
At a baby born
It's intestines are all
Outside his body
They try to save the baby
But the possability
The baby will die is still there

The babies parents
Sit and cry with worry
Hoping and praying
They can help thier baby
Knowing there is a possability
The baby might die
And that is sad to me

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2002-09-02 10:52 PM

You have a gentle heart and it is evident in your work. There is always such sophisticated thinking wrapped softly in simple cloth. A unique quality that I like very much in your poems. ThisDiamond

ThunderMage
Senior Member

since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

2 posted 2002-09-02 11:43 PM

I agree with the thoughts. I only wish I could put the words together like that.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

3 posted 2002-09-02 11:50 PM

It is VERY sad to see a child have to struggle from birth. I'm sure that God has HUGE plans for this one.

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

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