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brian sites
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0 posted 2002-09-02 02:14 PM


old lady
   in a park
watching children
     play

the library of her eyes

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

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1 posted 2002-09-02 02:19 PM


gorgeous...

I posted a challenge awhile back based on this African proverb:

"When an old man dies, a library burns down."

This reminded me of that. Thanks Bri..gentle and quiet, and yet so visual...

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2 posted 2002-09-02 02:25 PM



Dang.  What Serenity said...then some....

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3 posted 2002-09-02 03:06 PM


After the above comments...hmmmm, a hard
act or acts to follow...  Yes,  this poem
certainly has much to it, even with the
brevity of it..

brian sites
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4 posted 2002-09-02 03:21 PM


thank you

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5 posted 2002-09-02 03:29 PM


This is absolutely perfect, Brian...
"the library of her eyes"
Wow!!!!!
~ admiring hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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6 posted 2002-09-03 12:26 PM


This tiny poem had a huge impact on me!
"...the library of her eyes"----I'll not ever forget this line, Brian.

Linda

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7 posted 2002-09-03 12:48 PM


brian,
Good thought, good write, enjoyed.

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8 posted 2002-09-03 06:04 PM


Bri,
Your mind is obviously
a library itself.

*flipping pages*
Mike

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9 posted 2002-09-03 09:47 PM


I waited to reply, so that this may be bumped.

I see here a great little movie.

Just 30 seconds of this womans' face as she reviews the stacks.

So, up it goes!

~Ed

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".      

~wranx~

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