Vowel by Consonant, inspired by Tabin & Blaise

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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-09-02 12:04 PM

Vowel by Consonant

Lay them out, one by one,
                             Peanut-buttering smooth
Line them up, done by done
                             Savor the moment’s truth
Like keys of bone and ebony
                              Rhyming timing lining pockets
Whip stitching thoughts of harmony
                              Tucked safe in golden lockets
Laze their lolling words refined
                               Like golden nuggets dissolving
In a treasure chest, re-mined,
                               For now, one heart, resolving

That vowel by consonant, it is true
Silk-strung words, Poets drape, for you.

~*~

©Karilea Rilling Jungel
2 September 2002

Vowel by Consonant – inspiration by Seymour Tabin
“whip stitching thought” – Challenge by Serenity

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (09-02-2002 01:13 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-09-02 12:14 PM

I love the sounds that flow and weave in this.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2002-09-02 12:26 PM

chuckling...hmmm Tabin & Hood sounded like a law firm---Tabin & Blaize sounds like comedy team of ventriloquism...the only question I have? is who gets to sit on WHOSE lap?

(oh...and it's almost right now, but I fear my name is spelled B-l-a-i-S-e (me been studying, duh)

Wonderful poem, and I thank you, a clever combo and I should have known YOU'D be the one to baste these together! Hugs, you!

Magnus

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3 posted 2002-09-02 12:39 PM

You know,  I think that gleam in Sun's eyes
is not a gleam,  but is a wicked little
look that only she could possibly have...
as she cooks up another potion of poetry..

oooops,  oh yes,  this is a reply to HER poem....hmmmmmmmm.....KJ,  I think you
and Karen would make one heck of a duo too.

with all of these consonants and vowels to
play with...

SMILING as he departs, stage left.....

Mag.

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4 posted 2002-09-02 12:42 PM

*came back to add* See? You didn't see sy's lips move ONCE didja? I've been trying to tell ya'll for YEARS I was the DUMMY!!!!

"Now Sy? If you could just put your hand, right, um...wait, no...lower...YEAH...THERE!"

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Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-09-02 12:45 PM

Ah Karilea...
That I should be so clever...
and on a Holiday Monday to boot!!
This is very intricately woven..
and much enjoyed!
~Hugs YOU!~

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2002-09-02 01:46 PM

Karilea,
You are stiring Randy Dragon, I see some fire in the cave. My goodness but you are brave.

PS One wonderful poem.

Martie

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7 posted 2002-09-02 02:15 PM

Karilea

You are amazing!

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-09-02 03:49 PM

Just popped in to say I love the addition of the pic!!

Mistletoe Angel

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9 posted 2002-09-02 04:57 PM

Wow, oh my gosh, this is a beautiful sonnet, and a beautiful inspiration I might add that I know Seymour and Cerenity will enjoy! (smiles) This is very intricately woven, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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10 posted 2002-09-02 06:21 PM

Now it is perfect!

(somebody's gotta show me how to do that picture thang...but then, I think I get enough trouble!

)

Thanks Kari...this was like a present!

Madame Chipmunk
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11 posted 2002-09-02 07:09 PM

This is so special, Karilea...

Like keys of bone and ebony
Rhyming timing lining pockets...

I wish I could write like that...
and I can see the influence of both Sy and Karen in this one...
The 3 of you make a great team.

~ hugs and grins

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

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