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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-09-02 09:05 AM



The little spider
weaves her web
intricate, beautiful
she'll be fed.

With the dawn
comes the dew,
tiny droplets
wonderful view.

Now the web
a masterpiece
reflecting sunlight
where she'll feed.

WhiteRose

The White Rose~
A simple expression
of classic beauty.

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2002-09-02 09:24 AM


amazing stuff
VAS
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2 posted 2002-09-02 10:31 AM


You've told of the beauty well for one who has been in awe of the marvels of a spider's web.I'm guessing it would be as difficult for us to show the beauty in words as it would be to create a web as intricate and lacy with the sparkles of dew bejeweling each strand.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2002-09-02 10:39 AM


WhiteRose
Lovely, enjoyed the read.

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4 posted 2002-09-02 10:56 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, I love spiders and this is a true artistic fancy, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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5 posted 2002-09-02 10:57 PM


Amazing

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2002-09-02 11:12 PM


Nice write. ThisDiamond
Madame Chipmunk
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7 posted 2002-09-02 11:49 PM


I don't think most people appreciate the intricacy of the spider's web.  Its amazing that an insect can create such beauty.
Thanks for sharing it with us
~ webby hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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